ok Asmo I tried your mission, withouht wanting to spoil the fun for future players here goes a breif commentary ;D
Overview:
Nice pic, pretty explanatory (fast and accurate).
Briefing:
Very, very explanatory ;D no errors in English (for a Portuguese that is ;D ) nice links with markers, all perfect, you shouldn't change the briefing more, like it is,it works and is perfect, really nothing to point or to sugest.
INTRO:
Nice music, I've already made a mission using that same song once ;D
The intro is very well done the explosions give a nice effect and packed with the nice cameras you've choosen makes it all really beatifull, specially that kind of flash light effect is really something that I have to say gives impact and feeling to the mission, no bugs to report all worked well and no lag here.
Thanks for including BAS's name in the intro ;D I'm glad you liked them mate
MISSION:
As soon as I started the mission, it laged a bit,and my computer is fast and as 1024 DDR Memory so you should be carefull with the amount of units your using.
From the start I could say that this mission was hard, I've managed to die a couple of times and also to have all my squad dead a lot of times. ;D
When I managed to don't die and reached a place near the computers I had a first bug, I got a radio message saying well done now proceed to next waypoint...,
well I didn't even see the computers, nevertheless the place was hot like s*** so I just went out of there fast.
I went to the second city, and than a waypoint appeared saying wait for the others and than some *****
appeared and noting more happened, so this is possibly a second bug but I'm gonna try it again just to be sure I didn't make anything wrong,I was the only one, all my squad was dead so maybe that was the problem??? Nevertheless I have to say my gameplay was a disater, I hope to make it better next time ;D
I will report you back with more details as soon as I figure if it was just a bad luck bug, however I think you should check the consistency of this mission.
One Sugestion for now:
Instead of having so many enemys, maybe putting a couple of soldiers inside some buildings, and than some in some selected places would make it as hard as it is, and could make you reduce some of the soldiers patroling the area, it gives a nice panic effect, but it also lags the game a bit.