Regular, V1.08 FDFSounds, Truview ModI feel a bit like an English teacher here, sorry for pointing out all the typos but if a job’s worth doing, it’s worth doing well.
And, being as you say this is the last version before review I've put my extra critical hat on.
Overview:Picture shape “feels” wrong, they’re normally wide and squat not square.
Devided (divided)
Intro:Makes more sense now, I’m still amazed how much control you have over the first character.
In the text all instances of As should be as, it doesn’t look right having a capital letter there.
First shot on the hill hits the ridge, driver still dies. Although the second time I ran through it worked ok.
Presidental = Presidential
Presidntal bodyguard 1 & 2= Presidential
Voice acting cutrsc, there is some text underneath, I couldn’t make it out though.
Briefing:Esterlla= Estrella
In detailed briefing gen. benitez is all lower case.
Because it's our interest that it will now be know that we are supporting one of the sides we can't send large forces or an airstrike.
This sentence doesn’t read well, could try something like:
Because it now is known that we are supporting one of the sides we can't send in large forces or an airstrike.
Specialy = specially
*) Connect the device to the computer, wait for it to analays (analyse) the system.
Equpment = equipment
Mission:
The chopper seems to be moving in slow-mo now.
On my assault of the town an unarmed man ran right past me heading from the way I came towards the town. So I shot him anyway.
Relaible = reliable
The action should be Check Body it’s check Body
Just before getting into the base I had another unarmed dude run past me. He ran into the base, obviously I got spotted by someone and a Vulcan came over and swatted me.
Thankfully I’d just saved.
Reload
Get hint about being near the Officer, nice touch.
Get the message ok.
Paradroping = para dropping
Were = we’re
Youre (your) tracing device
First instance I get of the tracker was called strat track I think. After I’d used it and switched off it became Start Tracker.
Nicked the Vulcan ( I would say this should be locked like the other tanks or if you don’t want to lock it put the “Keys” in the pocket of one of the loons around the fire.
Head towards where the rifle should be, spot a couple of bad guys but they disappear in a hail of Vulcan fire, find the ammo crate ok.
In the titletext, one of the instances of Officer is officer.
Pick up the sniper rifle and get teleported off somewhere else and find out afterwards the whole place is crawling with enemy. Meh
“You did
a good job”
Have a mount waypoint hovering over me to get into the Vulcan. (need an unassignvhicle command maybe?)
My escape route is now somewhere different.
Have to face getting out of here with a silenced pistol and a Sniper rifle, surrounded by loons. Without even having the pleasure of the kill.
Several retries, take out 3-4 groups of 4 with a silenced pistol and decide to pinch an M16. Head towards the extraction and get an error pop up:
((leader (_helpers #select _i)) distance (leader _grp)) < _d…
Error Zero divisor.
Carry on regardless.
A few reloads required…to get to the extraction.
Get a message about surrendering, huh? I look around and before I know it, gets shot.
Reload:
Ok, this time notice an action. Go to click it, gets shot.
Reload:
Get the action menu ready and click straight away.
Another cutscene, end.
Outro:Fine, although the humans voice files seem quite low and the lip files don’t seem to be quite right, although they’re fine.
All IMHO.
Conclusion.I didn’t blow up the armour (my fault) and I still had “find information about the sniper” objective unchecked. And I didn’t get to play with the hacking thing.
What I like:
The scripting is very clever stuff and the control of some the characters is very good indeed, like the cutscene with my character jumping out the doorway (could do with a bigger explosion though;)).
The setup/scenario is quite intriguing, normally this would be a Rambo mission, player against the world.
What I didn’t like:
The breaks between scenarios, it kills the atmosphere when I’m teleported to another area. I don’t have any objections to walking to the next section, just give me a reason to go there. To move to the 2nd part I just need instructions to go to the base to kill the officer and get the intel. I know why you move the character so you can have the little scene with the Angel, you could still have something similar when you get near the base. To move to the 3rd part just tell me to go to the bush and lie up until you can take the shot, then have the small cutscene.
I never like it in a mission when I’m told to stop and surrender, like hell I will! Especially after fighting through 12-16 loons to get here. What about fighting and when the player gets injured (tricky one to manage, but I’m sure you can come up with something) then tell him to surrender.
All IMHO.
Cheers
PS-Just re-read part of the thread and noticed this:
but can anyone finish it as the Angel (the sniper)... i just wanna make sure his part is working good also
I've missed something here then.
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