Others have reported plenty of spelling mistakes, so I'll not pay attention to those.
There were some glaring grammar mistakes though, such as "Be weary of your six", sic. I think you mean "Be wary of your six"? I digress...
OverviewNice, concise, no problems.
IntroLove this intro. Only problems I saw were BIS related, you did one hell of a job forcing the AI to do what you wanted though.
BriefingWho could ask for more. Information out the wazoo.
MissionWell, the first part went smooth enough, apart from the super slow helo insertion (I understand this though as the AI, particularly pilots, are a mother to control.) Took out some infantry, moved into the building, enjoyed the little cutscene. I like how you made him jump off the ledge! Tried to steal a 4x4 to drive to the extraction point... too hot! lol. Made me use some bandages, which brings up another point...
I broke your medipack. I haven't looked at the script, but I think when you use the "Heal Completely" action, it uses a set number of bandages. If you don't have enough, it goes ahead and gives you negative bandages, so I could heal myself as many times as I wanted from then on. Checking it with something like "bandages == 0" ?... maybe use bandages <= 0 to remove the action.
On to Cedras... I like the computer hacking deal, took me a couple tries to figure out. So then I clear the whole village out.... and... nothing.
I never saw an officer, never got a message that I killed him either. I checked each dead body a couple times. I even took the helo on a little sight seeing tour. Nada.
I went to the extraction point... nada. So I was forced to quit. Can't continue.
Debriefing/OutroUnknown.
SummaryI love what you've done with scripts. The plot and the voices are a bit hard to follow, a la "This doesn't feel right...I wouldn't defend a leader like that." radio message that popped up randomly? I didn't know what it was eluding to.. I was just crawling around at the time and didn't see anything.
Anyway, apart from not finding that tricky officer in Cedras, I enjoyed the mission. (I really don't like the whole lone-wolf spec-op night mission kinda thing though, but that's completely personal taste, nothing wrong with a mission like this.) Keep up the good work, I will have to reverse engineer some of your scripts if that's ok.
If I use/modify anything I'll definately credit you. Nicely done so far LCD!