Sorry didnt read others comments. Here is my take on the mission.
Overview- good picture, but write something, palce, time, bad guys...
Intro- Good- I loved it. It went somewhere, gave ya details nice work on the map and markers.
Only one probablem at the near the end of intro
errror:-Sound bas_spacetime_s not foundBrief- Have the town names hightlight clickable. Second paragragh a big run on sentence. Try..
squad. Advance..
Montignac. Try keeping ...
Bravo, and don't...
to. The idea..
Liked the addtional Info. link.
Notes- i'm not picky but run on sentence here too. try...
operation! I didnt .....
I did. However, I did ... Again in notes not that important to me to others it may.
Group-Still a Prvt after 8 mission in a campaign, (No feild promotion?) an Expert Prvt.?? maybe a veteran.
Mission- Begining I felt we had overwhelming odds against East. Took first town, Montignac, easily. I got some shooting in and took out some guys. Didn't Really have time to get myself organized. Leader had shipped off an was engaged in battle for Entre Deux. By the time I got to the action, most of the Squad had fallen. This was a shooting gallery and my guys were the targets. This is where I died a couple of time and figured I need to flank. By the way good protection on the flanks, it was not easy.
Finally got smart hit the OFP game's save point before getting shot. Took over Entre Deux, after the sandbags, good touch there :gunman: Then the counter assualt happened and I took command??(West guys appearing from nowhere??) humm strange all but one of my guys were down??.. ok... better this way! So hit my guys prone and spread them out and let laws and the Rogue M1a1 do damage. Mission complete.
18 min., 6360pts, one pearl. Bunch of guys taken down on both sides
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Outro- Great, nice quick and to the point.
My take is to have a little more East in Montignac, have first-aid available between Montignac and Entre. The feild hospital in Entre didn't heal me?? Give time betweeen Monti and Entre. Let Brain know tha he has gotten replacements/support when the he enters Entre Deux. Good job on this one keep It going