i gonna b da 1st judge 2 get a point in da competition
ok i played it once... and heres da resaults
package
1) readme shud probably have credits 4 beta testers
2) couple of adv pics shud b added b4 release
Overview
1) maybe addin da mision name in da overview somewere
2) da pic shud have border
Intro
No intro
Briefing
1) it shud contain more paragraphs
2) u cud do somin in da notes section... like sit rep or anything else... leave da contact details 2 da readme
3) use 1 marker 4 da insertation and extraction instead of 2
Mision
1) use da players name instead of player : in da conversation between alvarez and player (titletext [format ["%1:nla bla",name player],
"plain down"])
2) mebe addin a medikit... in case da player get seriusly injured (its not fun 2 crawl all around da mision
3)it seems dat on da bridge da guarding soldiers (standin around da MG) just stay in place even after i start shptin em (1 of em did move but it took him ages)
4) it took me 5 scatchels 2 get da bridge down... mebe i position da 1st couple somere wrong... so u cud comment about dat in da brief
5) do da enemies near da bridge go somewere.... or is dere really really small amount ? cuz i went (after killin da soldiers on my side) back 2 rearm and returned and dere were somin like 4 soldiers left...
6) in da town have da driver climb out of da jeep if his gunner is dead
7) da soldiers at da start of da town shud move if i start sniping dem
i sugest addin a save between radio tower and bridge
9) have da enemy soldiers move more... in da town it seems most of em lay on da ground and dont look around (very easy 2 flank) u can also kill 1 and da 1 near it wont even look @ u
10) 1 of da soldiers was laying prone inside a blue crane (he had jeep and couple of ammo boxes near him) he cudnt shot from inside it (his head and gun were stickin out)
11) mebe add a couple of scatchel charges inside da ammo boxes in town... i had 2 run all da way back 2 alvarez 2 get some
12) on my way back 2 alvarez i found an unarmed soldier near da BMP wreck
13) mebe addin radio msgs after every complete objective ?
outro
I like
conclusion
mision has no show stopers and it runs smoothly... but its still basic (kinda fun tho) i suggest u improve AI response (also da bridge cud get rienforcments from da town or somin... 2 show dat dey r conected nd help each oder)
LCD OUT
[edit] ps dis mision also needs da fixed sandbags addon (i didnt have till it asked me 2) either remove it from mision or add it 2 addon requirments
Project Beta Approved