Played this one a bit tonight, we started late so we didn't get to far in it. Great job on the first cutscenes you can tell you're getting better at it. I think though some of chatting thats going on should be moved up to a titlecut rather then using the chat function.
I think you should add notes on how the vehicle respawn works, becuase we were always surprised when a different vehicle showed up.
thats all for now, we had a short run at it and got to the 3rd base.