Right on, I look forward to having a look at this mission in a couple minutes.
EDIT:
Family pulled me away after about 20 minutes. I got as far as attacking Lopatino while trying it in single-player. Now that I've seen a bit of how the story develops, I'll have to give the English a second look. Some of the dialog, like just after the explosions and first invasion cutscene, are not appropriate for the scene. I'll make more edits and post them for your thoughts soon.
As far as other bits...
The mission load screen reads the mission title as 'Go to the warehouse' but the mission name is 'Once Upon a Time'
Loading in seemed fine, and the equipment I expected to find in the truck was there, but I would not have known to check had I picked up the mission w/o this forum leadin. (The fix is a simple dialog edit I can add, probably in the conversation just before I leave the tractor).
Great cutscene with the tanks, but I'd cut out the last part scrolling over trees and a field, it makes it a bit long and reduces the emergency I first felt from seeing all those tanks.
At Dimitri's, the KORD mounted properly, and I liked your choices for available weapons. It's what I expected for this level of militia. Also, great work on the song and the little cutscene to the truck and jeep. The music was still playing, and the subtitles displayed while looking at a developing Russian force fit the mood. One of the soldiers was running in place. I don't know if there's much you can do about it.
Problem: Just after fixing the cord, artillery (tank rounds?)began falling on Dimitri's home. The very first, before I had a chance to even hit my keyboard, knocked out the tires of the truck. I was left to walk all the way to Lopatino. Dimitri died, and it was a neat little extra to find a watch on him I could take. His wife, the poor soul, was left cowering by the fence with no home or hubby.
Other than figuring out how to keep the truck from being disabled on the first round (still leave it in a danger zone, it's good encouragement to get moving), I thought some dialog was needed between Igor and the wife about Dimitri's death, something simple and quick, not prosaic, but to the point. E.g, Dimitri's wife -calling Dimitri's name, then wailing, crying. Igor also calling “Dimit-b`lyad'! (I checked, it means ‘fuck!' in Russian.) Then to the wife ‘We'll get them for this. I have to go.'
Approaching Lopatino I met another couple tanks, nice addition to keep me from running straight to the town, and another chance for me not to shoot at something.
When attacking Lopatino I'll definitely need to try it in MP. With the CZ550 I chose, my survivability was poor in CQB. That's as far as I made it yesterday, but I'm excited to see the rest. I'll adjust the English as needed and post a second draft when it's done..