I'll start with this mission needs some proper versioning.
The briefing notes/tasks don't appear until after you have fully started and are in the mission.
Assult is spelt wrong in the tasks. Its Assault. Each city should be its own task. Maybe it is we gave up pretty quick.
Respawn doesn't remember your gear. This really sucks especially in a mission like this.
I think I'd like the ability to set task and receive a WP to the city. I think i'd also like to see all the towns and be able to choose the first town.
I'd rather see a gui selection rather then a scrolling selection for the vehicles.
Thats all I have for now. not glamorous I know...