Ok gave this mission ago...
IntroNo intro, I would suggest adding one to hide the dac startup.
BriefingNo picture in the briefing... I would add one.
The paragraph is one run on sentence, no punctuation or stopping, it just goes on and on till the end.
Your inconsistent with the capitalization of each objective, each first word should be capitalized.
Some typoes...
suplies = supplies
bace = base
surplies = supplies
sahrani = Sahrani
The notes section doesn't look complete yet so I won't comment just yet.
MissionWell there are no markers, and the information in the briefing is a bit weak. You need to let the player know what he has to do.
I tripped over to the northern part of sahrani as it was the only blue I saw on the map. So I didn't run into anyone and was instantly bored.
Consider giving the human players WPs in the editor so the player has some idea of where to go.