As I have seen you are now sending to review your missions here for beta-testing I decided to give you a bit more feedback in order to perfect them before the next destination. More to follow in the different topics.The Package by Cheetah
a beta-test by NBSVieiraPT
InformationArmed Assault v1.09.5208, Veteran difficulty, AI expert. Using Truemods and Chammy's Sound Mod.
PackageFine. Promo pic is interesting and the readme is concise but has everything the player needs to know.
Overview: Lacks a picture. The text is fine but rather short.
Intro: N/A
BriefingPlan: It is ok but lacks a bit more information. Maybe specify what enemy units one may encounter?
Notes: Again, too simple and concise for my taste. Maybe explain why we must drive through enemy territory to deliver a misterious package? It is ok though, just a personal opinion.
Gear: Fine.
Map: Everything works, no glitches.
Mission:Started in an undisclosed location only pointed out by the GPS which I liked and proceeded as driver to Ortego.
Drove fast through Ortego but got ambushed and got my windshield wrecked which lead me to run over two enemy units before they even shot.
In the next town was once again ambushed by an enemy UAZ and got killed. My gunner prooved to be useless.
[Retry][Retry#1] This time I decided to go as gunner through the cities as my gunner was to slow to react leading us to always get shot.
Neutralized Ortego ambush even before they could shoot, same with lone ambush pockets in the road to the nearest road, before the UAZ, switched to gunner and neutralized it. Went through the town as gunner but got ambushed again and my driver died, so I picked up the wheel and drove away before any RPG could hit us. In the way to the objective only found some small ambush pockets quickly neutralized by my gunner or my mad driving skills and managed to reach the desired location with still 55 seconds to spare.
Outro: N/A
Debriefing: All fine. Over 15 kills, I never look at the score.
Closing comments:I liked this mission, straight to the point and fast always giving the player the sense of constant danger. The ambushes were well laid out and the UAZ was a nasty piece to get over. Some small ambush pockets, specially in those tight corners could be hidden which would make things a bit harder.
The AI is useless as gunner in the bigger ambushes in cities and too slow as drivers, but hey! that's not your fault at all. Though it all went very smooth.
Can't wait to play the other missions you have here still to be reviewed.