Package: A proper package with a readme that was well written and the proper mission .pbo.
Overview: An excellent overview. I tweaked the colors of my LCD monitor and the links were showing up better - so it was just my end.
Intro: The intro was fabulous, as I said above. The camera angles were beautiful and it set the atnosphere very well. And extremely creepy.
Briefing: It was well done, providing enough intel to fit the story line. Also the gear selection was good. I could not find any spelling/grammar mistakes.
Mission: I was expecting myself to be ready this time since I've been through the mission before, but I have to say, the walk/run to the ruins was still creepy. Those NVA voices give you the chills because they seem like they're all around you.
Everything ran all fine and dandy until we reached the ruins.
Showstopper: At the ruins, I was placed propperly, but the VC and NVA didn't ever attack. I restarted and they still didn't.
I don't know if a variable didn't trip, but I couldn't get the NVA/VC to ever come.
Outro: It was very mysterious and well done, leaving me to want to see the next mission.
Overall: Unfortunately, another error. But still looking good.
Project Beta Approved