Overview
INSTANTLY better
the paras now look good, not messy. Great spacing between (and yes, i do know how tuff that is to do)
Just great pilot in 'look' alone.
Much prefer the flag as it is now, even though it's politically correct.
It has the unfortunate side effect of being a base anywhere, but no biggie. IF you are moving towards a campaign, which smacks and smells in everything about this introductory mission, you've found the moniker. The logo for the rest.
It's actually a nice shot btw, quite different to the usual photo of Houdan skyline. Pity perhaps it couldn't be sharper (in the rain!!!!)
Nah, I alt tabbed, and alt -tabbed back here. that the ov is a beauty. well done.
Intro:
Wooo, must confess I was looking for it, but last sentence was a smack between the eyes wasnt it !!!
Bloody terrific, bloody good, packs a punch kiddo.
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You are being analy retentive.
Ten days ago? Come on, you love your year dates and precision don't you. You'll get trapped.
"A few days earlier", or "The previous week"
followed by
"for the rest of that week," drop the preciseness you put there. Always always allow the players imagination to run, never, never, put forward YOUR version of how things are, you are only, the author. Never intrude on how a player 'feels'. The glove will not fit the shoe 9/10 times and you will take away a player's enjoyment. It's not your mission once the bell starts. You are, only the author.
Briefing:
Notes:
2 to 1 always reads better than 1 to 2, that jarred. You mean 1 to 2 servings, a teaspoon and a bit, or do you means odds of 2 to 1.
Plan:
beautifully presented, and easy to read. All links worked (my god!!) Tremendous lack of use of the word HERE, well done. Hear, hear.
Weapons:
you sneaky mongrel. You intentionally dropped the god-forsaken smoke canisters and intentionally kept the G30.
Group:
This is a technical decision on your part, I feel uncomfortable with everyone being a god-damn expert, made more sense to me, v1.2. The previous gave me the feel of my most trusted members being close to me (2/3)
Game:
'good luck guys..."
I was gonna say as follows
"another trap because many of us here have played this. First time grunts will be in shock and awe mode, trying to get a handle on where they are. They wont spot THE spetz"
so what do you do?
Eeep.
Started off in usual fashion, then...
Our people adored the trucks, they loved them so much they shot at nothing else, and finally, (what appeared to be) the dreaded M2 bug has now moved centre stage.
I surendered
showstopper
"_man = uints ... error divide by zero, game stalls to black half way through hands on head AND WE GET SHOT