Package
Include a good promo shot and readme. The editor addon is pretty well used you could remove it from the zip and point to it.
Intro
There is none, might want to have the boats move in with drivers and then drive off. Use it as a quick cut scene before you land.
Briefing
No picture should add one.
Briefing is short not bad.
I think you really need to consider a weapons pool here. I just hate the aim point. You could limit the weapons in the pool to just quiet guns.
Notes
Line up your radio calls something like this, looks more pleasing to the eye.
Radio Calls:
"Charley Brown has come home." - Sniper team engage enemy officer.
"Snoopy is close." - Armored support is on their way.
"Wash your hands" - Mission abort/done, head back to beach for pickup.
"Echo" - Call for extraction.
"Hotel" - Everyone in, leave.
Mission
Revive warning overlays the Charile Brown message occasionally.
We played this mission several times, the tough approach up to town caught us off guard we manged to only make it to the top of town. we gave up after about 7 tries just frustrated with the weapon of choice. Over all we'll be watching for updates in this mission.
One consideration is to get the moon nice and bright the attempts through the trees was difficult. we were constantly getting grenaded.