(Review Completed) [SP] Fida'i - Checkpoint.

[MrN]

I've had a quick punt at this but for the moment it eludes me. I can normally take on 20 men single handed but I can't take that bloody checkpoint! I just need to be a bit sneakier about it I think.

There's plenty of typo's and spelling probs which have already been pointed out.

But, the setup is quite cool, the roadblock is well executed and I'll have a go at the weekend when I have more time.

 

[LCD]

actually me and my bro can do it in 4, 5 mins if we are stealthy enough... right now it seems all da bugs (not talkin bout typos...  ) r squashed but im still tryin 2 balance difficulty settings on dat

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[MrN]

Ya, de impreshun I had wus dat it wus all slik and stuff but it wus my lame skilz that cauzed the probs.

 

[LCD]

New version... hopefully da last one too... 

i fixed da typos pointed out  nd made a readme file 

so lets see how da testin goes now

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[MrN]

Regular, V1.07

Intro:
The camerawork is good and a neat effect when the civ gets killed.

Typo in briefing assualt (assault)

Missionanough too Outro

[LCD]

lol 

i think ur suposed 2 knock him out nd put him in da baggage ?... ill script dat can b fun 

ill fix dose small erorrs just tomorow... thx 4 betain dis

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[MrN]

i think ur suposed 2 knock him out nd put him in da baggage ?.

Good plan.
 

[LCD]

i didnt find a good hitting anim  but i scripted somein anywayz... so now u can actually put pow in trunk of ur jeep... oh yes what i meant 2 say is... new version

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[MrN]

i didnt find a good hitting anim

what about this one:

AwopPercMstpSgthWnonDnon_end

Downloading now...

Edit: You sure this is the update? The date and filesize is identical to the other one I have.

[LCD]

i added 5 lines of code  nd removed 5 lines somewere else

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[MrN]

Edit: You sure this is the update? The date and filesize is identical to the other one I have.

My bad, it's still early here...

I can't seem to get in the truck so the mission doesn't end. I can put the POW in the trunk but I can't do anything else...unless I'm missing something 

[LCD]

oopsie

dont tell ny1 bout it

i just put lock true instead of lock false.... 

fixed btw

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[MrN]

i just put lock true instead of lock false....

That would do it. 

Seems all good now. 

I know you're probably wishing I'd stop bugging you but it may be an idea to limit the ammo loadout, I can do this in about 3/4 minutes, 3 grenades and 3/4 rifleshots now. Maybe get rid of the grenades? I can turn into a close range artillery position and nade the crap out of the roadblock before the bad guys have woken up.

TTFN

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[LCD]

remove da grenades its gonna b den ...... i alwayz like 2 hear stuff like dat i hate grenades nywayz... dey lack da prescision i like 

but right now i need 2 go n work... so dats 4 sometime else... MrN u da best    wudnt got were i am W/O u 

still dis ver 4 beta ppl... da nades tingy gonna b removed just b4 submiting i think

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[Cheetah]

still dis ver 4 beta ppl... da nades tingy gonna b removed just b4 submiting i think

Removed [PLEASE REVIEW], add it back if you really want it reviewed and it's out of beta phase, please.

EDIT:

I'm going to review this mission.