@Jezuro
>Intro change of mind...
I should have just used the words 'suggested' to make the blackout a little less. It's good as is, I think that brief flashes of 'action' would be better.
>The position of the contact hasn't changed at all
hmm, i missed him 1st version because i was (rightly) focussing on that lighthouse area. You have to watch for players doing the unpredictable, ie everything else EXCEPT what you want them too, we aren't dumb, we are cunning. 2nd version, I was looking for him, so I suspect this is an 'author thing' we're you're so used to him being 'there', it aint obvious. It sure is obvious when you look. If you look. Perhaps changing the car to a brighter color might be better (tm)
ditto comment on graveyard buisiness, we WILL arm ourselves if we can, no matter what you say, we should do, or hint to do. It's because ofp itself allows us to be wide open in our game play. It might be 'obvious' to attack from the south because we're closer eg. Many players will circle round and attack a target from the north instead, simply, because we can.
Although you've initially disarmed me, I would additionally, delete the items and restore them after the sequence. I didn;t think or assume eg, that rearming with binoculars would have caused me so much grief. If you say I can only have my handgun, make sure I only can. Get my fake russian eg to disarm me with a voiceover, makes whole thing more authentic.
>4 man patrol
First version had these people, or 4 anyway, very close to where the jeep stops. I drove past them and they ignored me.
this version, they were'nt there, and I assume 'they' are now at the tent area, which is a VERY long way from the stop position. I am very unlikely to drive that road, unless I'm dead stupid. So the walk, was long and boring. We need another bunch of them where they originally were for this part of the mission to be 'agreeable'.
>download
no problem here, obviously, but the general confusion could be sorted out by making sure you always version, the zip file at least.
This mission of yours remains one of my favorites.:cheers:
Topic: (Review Please) Three Kings v1.06 (Read 12771 times)