Played this mission a pile times tonight and really had some fun with it. Here are a few things I found.
Aassualt is spelt assault in several different places(mission description).
Nice clean breifing & tasks, would expect to see a picture especially where you mention there is a arial photograph, one would expect to see an pic here.
That song has to go. Its way to loud. if you keep it in there turn the volumn down a bit on it. I think I would rather here some radio calls about the mission at hand then that song.
Could use some additional mp options, like grass and time of day add some randomness.
Really enjoyed the tough ness of this mission, we didn't get too far into it with just two of us, but sure had a lot of fun trying it over and over. so kudos to keeping us interested.