Hi!
Just tried out your mission on SP...
Overview
The text is good but the picture is a bit strange, the colors are off and it is blurry.
Intro
A good intro that really stands by it's name, simply a nice introduction of what I am up to.
Briefing
The map was crowded with editor-placed objects, the Briefing itself was not bad, but it has several typos. I suggest to check in with a native speaker. But what I am missing the most is a weapons selection as I will explain in the mission section.
Mission
I have to admit that I barely progressed into the mission. I tried to advance into the town from both the left side and the right side of the road, but since this is a daytime mission, at least one enemy always spotted me before I could finish him off. Speaking of that: It is incredibly hard to hit and kill somebody with that MP5. At engagement distances of 150-200 meters (the enemies open up that early), it is really a pain in the a**. Once they have you in their sight, the game is lost, because the MP lacks the range, while their AK's are deadly at this firing distance.
Bottom line: A decent assault rifle is needed to make this mission enjoyable (at least for me).