PackageHas everything it needs, e.g. a readme and a promo pic.
OverviewCould use a picture, since you already provided one with the package.
IntroNone, as this is a "no frills", easy-to-make-mission. Yet I still like to see an intro.
BriefingVery short. It could have some sentences of a background story. Since the Briefing is already present, it could not hurt to write just a little more. I just want to have some sense of "why we fight" in each and every mission. And a weapons selection would be very handy, although I am not sure if that would be "too much frills".
MissionJust a quick shoot-em-up. I did not like the time limit that comes with no logical reason, and the stress it imposed, because it defeats the whole purpose of ArmA as a tactical shooter in my opinion. I would have preferred to have no time limit, but a wave of attackers after I captured that village. But each to his own.
Outro See Intro.
ConclusionI am not sure if I like the "no frills" category of quick-and-dirty-missions, but I think I have to see more of them to get a feeling for it. Please take no offense, each beta test is an expression of personal taste anyway. Technically speaking, the mission was flawless! And I am sure that many people will like it, as it enables to get some "public fame" for simple missions resting on anyone`s hard disk. As all mission editors know, it is very pleasing to read that someone else likes your very own mission. Don`t get discouraged just because this one is not exactly "my cup of tea".
Cheers
Mathias