(Review Completed) [SP] Guardian Angel

[LCD]

lol... ull stand up, u wont even get killed

LCD OUT

[MrN]

u wont even get killed

LOL, k then

 

[Nixer6]

are you sure the extraction point was changed to RACS MH

Yep, I even got a hint that the extract had changed

Mind you, this is the next to the latest version. I didn't wanna start all over again .

Then I just winged it.


edit: the marker didn't move, I just had the little yellow box, said get in or board here....somting like Dat. 

Just to clarify.

[LCD]

strange... did you get in da chopper before dat or something da hint is alright... but... dere shud not b any WPs... and da hint shud point 2 da extraction point 2 da regular place west of da city (remember dat da ext point starts somewhere in da west....)

LCD OUT

[Gizzy]

Thank you for the warm welcome.

And about the radio disappearing I have to say that was in Dynamic war of MrN that I lost the radio with the option to call the evac chopper...sorry 
S!

[sharkattack]

COMMENT 
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ive   started  on  version 8   ( huge  file  for  one  mission )
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overview
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nice  pic  could  be better  though   ...  from  mission  ??
two  pages  for  text ...  not  good ..  at a  glance please 

intro
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music is  good selection  - a little too loud  ??  -   where have i  heard this one 
(co8 pheonix  project  v1 or  was it  co 25 sharks  drift)

nice camera  work  introducing  the  main dudes in the mission
the human
the angel
mandoble
anthony benitez

(lots  of gunfire maybe control  it  better)

also the  president  is a dude in a baseball cap ?? why  not use
either of these 




a  very nice  touch  to mention script writers and  beta  testers
in  intro  instead  of  read me  ..

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briefing

a nice one  man  selection  of  weaponry for  player  to  choose from ..
i go with default ...

the main  page  is  clear  and  precise  offering  extra  info  if  required
eg
mugshot of  general which  you  have  to kill (which  i feel  could be better sized)
instructions  on  how  to  use  first  aid  script
instructions  on  how  to  use the  computer
no  instructions  on  how  to find  the hidden  documents


it  is at  this  point  i stop  and  become  convinced  i am  playing  my  own
mission  The  Tiptoe  Boys  II .. only  tarted  up  with  added  paa  files  and  dialogs ...?? 


i  couldnt  go  on  from  there ...   


all  said ...  LCD  has  made a  bloody  good  job of  intro ...

Well   done   mate ....   

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[LCD]

lol...

whats da modelname 4 dis 2 fine guyz... ill replace da prez w/ em

as 4 da mision... ull have 2 play 2 see how diffrent and more extensive is it

LCD OUT

[edit] what stoped u from playing on from dere hopefully not a bug ?

[sharkattack]

vehicle="NorthPrimeMinister"
vehicle="King"..

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i stopped  playing  because any  further  comments would of been biased
no signs  of any  bugs   

[LCD]

biased ? y ?

ohh right i finaly finished all da last small fixes... so review it

gimme 9 i want 9 (i know i shudnt say dat but its finaly done so wat da hell )

ive actually finished updatin it yesterday night and uploaded it on da server wen suddenly (while waitin 4 it 2 upload) i felt dere was a bug (my brain went over all da scripts on its own ) nd i also noticed its 4 AM and i have 2 wake up early 2 play soccer every saturday.... so I played like Man Utd 2 day  amnd got everything finished fast wen i was back.... it feel so good

LCD OUT

[edit] ohh i forgot
THX 4 all da beta testers who went w/ me all dis hard month nd got me here were i am u da best guyz love u all...

[SgtWolf]

So far I've got into the town, killed a few guys with a silenced pistol and I am just slowly but surely killing each and every one of the bad guys so that I can get to the General.

I've been enjoying this mission too, although there is one thing that did leave me a bit WTFed.  There was a lot of weapons fire suddenly occuring, and I could see tracers wizzing by the top of the building I was laying prone on.  I couldn't immediately see where it was coming from, as I had some weapons fire around me too.  Initially I thought the AI had gone bonkers and started firing on the building I was on the top of.

Then I looked at the top of the lighthouse and saw someone was up there and was shooting every bad guy with pinpoint accuracy.   Is this the Angel that is up there?

[Cheetah]

As far as I know, yes, it's the Angel.

[LCD]

it seems 2 b him

hes kool aint him

LCD OUT

[Nixer6]

Finished the final version everything worked cool.

I can't view your movie of the hacking device, codec problem or somesuch nonsense. So, I still couldn't hack in.

One small error in the mission....a script not found, right after Mando was killed. Royal something or other .sqs 

Sorry I didn't get the exact name LCD.   

[LCD]

thx 4 da beta nixer

i request 2 hold da review (somtin dats posible i think... as no1 is reviewin dis yet...) till i fix dat... da script is responsible 4 an eye candy... notin important

umm yeah

fixed review me already

updated... now da insertion part uses my strategy map dialog

LCD OUT

[Denz]

I'll take this one mate 
Project Beta takes priority but I'll have it done soon enough