Hi Gaia,
I've fixed up all the English Grammatica in your texts without changing or altering in any way the flow or meaning of what you've already done.
I didn't realise until i started editing this, how extensive a job you did with this mission. I hope you come back in with a few fixes and tweaks so that we can give it (or at least I can give it) a better round of applause.
It really is quite an extensive mission, and deserves a better comment than I gave it, please have another shot at it by perhaps fixing up the very dumbed down tanks and possibly better co-ordination of where all the troops are going (the triggers to their waypoints)
best wishes.