There is no weapons pool, you do provide ammo boxes, you might want to mention it in the briefing..
The Plan is simple and too the point, interesting picture you've chosen here.
Interesting real map picture you've included, it could be bigger.
I like what you've done with the news reports
Could do without the GoonBio on the last page after all this is a mp mission and usually you want to keep it small as possible. save this for the readme.txt which you didn't include in the zip.
You should include a promo pic in the zip and a readme.txt containing any addon information.
You don't provide much information about the radio calls, we used the ammo call a few times, this is a welcome addition. You should add what these radio calls are for.
There isn't one, you should add a little bit of one.
Pretty decent we never completed all the objectives, but we had some pretty good battles especially with. Didn't really come across any bugs. Im not sure if the intel was lowered on all those civies but they sure seemed easy to kill but you might want to add more of those res guys.