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« Reply #15 on: 14 Oct 2007, 17:51:29 »
Mission ready for more testing. Twice as long. More action and scripting. download at top.
edit xxxxxxxxxxxxxx i posted the wrong mission, game play is the same, just doest have text changed to bottom instaid of plain and added radio messages, and w/p's on one helo have changed. if this one has no bugs the other mission should be ready for a review, and ill test that myself, sorry schuler
will look at your beta test more in depth.
« Last Edit: 06 Nov 2007, 02:43:08 by schuler »
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« Reply #16 on: 02 Nov 2007, 05:39:39 »
Just ran through the latest version. There are a fair few typos to fix.

Overview
Good picture - no border though.
typos: "orders remove Russians" > orders to remove
occuping > occupying

Intro
None

Briefing
Text is ok. A few wrong words though.
typos: There with be > will be
position well we try > while we try
Dont move in to fast > Don't move in too fast
Gear selection.
A good variety of weapons.
Aha, a sniper rifle, must have missed that before. Had to take that SR-25, left the squad as there were.

Mission
Noticed on the beginning cut scene that the A-10 starts to move but when the mission begins it's still at the end of the runway.
Also when boarding the helo another Ranger patrol bumps and sticks onto the tail of the helo.
Cleared Larche with only one casualty - amazingly for me not the medic.
Did you raise the AI skill level? It seemed harder this time.
I waited for the A-10 to take out the BMPs first.
typos in radio messages: "Rifeling 10 mins out, injoy"> enjoy  and   "there's more that a platoon in here" > than a platoon
Evac fire on there positions > on their positions  - in both the radio message and hint box
Moved towards La Trinite. IED explodes and I get the warning about the scud.
typo in hint: Stand by tell the scud > till the scud
I know I said it last time but I do like that camera effect.
Haha, had to laugh. As I approached the town either a grenade or a shot from the BMP took out both of the medics - it's always the medics that get killed with me.
Cleared La Trinite with no problems - saw the new atrocity in the centre of town  :o
Civilian car came with three enemy soldiers in it. Killed them. Job Done.
Score 7960 29 kills - I rock with a sniper rifle  :D and most of those were head shots or at least upper body shots  :whistle:
Debriefing said End # 1 - is there more than 1 ending?

Outro
Apart from the weird camera angle right at the start, I thought the outro was pretty cool. I liked the old "strokefist" action at the end.

Overall
Pretty good mission. I still think there could be some more at the end (at La Trinite) but it does depend on what tactics you use to clear the town.
It's not an easy objective to complete.
I've got 'em right where I want 'em - surrounded from the inside!
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Re: Eviction sp by schuler
« Reply #17 on: 02 Nov 2007, 13:25:05 »
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Noticed on the beginning cut scene that the A-10 starts to move but when the mission begins it's still at the end of the runway.
Also when boarding the helo another Ranger patrol bumps and sticks onto the tail of the helo.
 Overlooked timing on that , changing the departure time.
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Typos
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Haha, had to laugh. As I approached the town either a grenade or a shot from the BMP took out both of the medics - it's always the medics that get killed with me.
Haaaa nice to know im not the only one, to much Nam! Lol

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Score 7960 29 kills - I rock with a sniper rifle   and most of those were head shots or at least upper body shots    Debriefing said End # 1 - is there more than 1 ending?
« Last Edit: 02 Nov 2007, 13:26:38 by schuler »
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« Reply #18 on: 04 Nov 2007, 17:13:33 »
Hi schuler,

A nice mission, nice to play and not to easy.
Played it in GRAA 3.0 Mod. Ok the faces are haloween style but that's ok.  ;)

  • For the SR sniper rifle I didn't get any ammo on the evac truck.
  • Nice cutscene with burning scud but I think it's not for real when you shoot a soldier that the scud blows up. Perhaps if using the fire.sys when hitting the scud with a missile.
  • One Objective completed there's a single "S" switches the enemy reinforcement to move.

I want to say I'm not the best in english, either.
But even I found some typos.
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    says.sqs
    • a10 sideChat "Rifling 5 mins out, injoy the show rangers!" > enjoy

    cutevac.sqs
    • ap9 sideChat "Iam receiving FIRE,,at La Trinite, Stay put iam coming in FAST!"
    :dunno: : I'm receiving FIRE at La Trinite. Stay down I'm coming in FAST!  ???

    pickoff.sqs
    • a10 sideChat "Theres more that a platoon in here Rangers!" > than

    mortor.sqs
    • ap1 sideChat "base we just had a IED!"  ??? :dunno: ???
    • hint "You have a new objective.  \n\nStand by tell scud is destroyed by cruise missile." > Stand by! Till scud...
    > But which missile?  ???

    • ap1 sideChat "copy, go blow the SHIT out of the basturds!!!"
    > bastards

    • TitleText ["Sir I can see from here civilians dead one has a bullet hole in the back of the head.", "Plain"]> Sir I can see dead civilians from here. One with a bullet hole in his back head.
    > Didn't you mean the civilians?  ???



Hope this will help you to sort it out. But of course anybody who finds a mistake in my text can teach me better.

May I suggest to you to add a version number in the overview. I for instant leave all versions of the missions in my "Beta Missions" folder. Having a version number in the file name doesn't help finding the right version in the mission board. Thus both will do fine!  ;)

Regards limmy3

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Re: Eviction sp by schuler
« Reply #19 on: 06 Nov 2007, 02:41:32 »
thanks limmy,  ;) i have an update coming soon. i keep adding things to damn mission, playing around. its really could use a boarded and a better briefing too. ive fixed most the typos you found more and i'll get to that too. and the version number. i didnt add the sniper ammo in the truck,,, glad you said that, i was meaning to ad that.
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Played it in GRAA 3.0 Mod. Ok the faces are haloween style but that's ok.

  cool lol i miss halloween, no fair! we dont do it here.
update coming soon. ,,,,,or later
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Re: Eviction sp by schuler
« Reply #20 on: 23 May 2008, 06:11:09 »
updated
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« Reply #21 on: 11 Jun 2008, 21:59:59 »
Hello schuler,

that is confusing the last version was 1.7 but know you continue with 1.3 beta.  ???

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« Reply #22 on: 12 Jun 2008, 02:09:57 »
hey Limmy, thats me, confusing  ;)
just keeping ya on your toes  :good: its is part of an older vers with an added intro and outro
by the time its done it might be ver 2009.05
cheers schuler
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« Reply #23 on: 12 Jun 2008, 17:37:20 »
Hi,

do you want me to review this 1.3 beta version?  ???

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« Reply #24 on: 13 Jun 2008, 01:41:36 »
yes please Limmy, its is the newest updated ver.
cheers schuler
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« Reply #25 on: 13 Jun 2008, 16:07:25 »
Hello schuler,

here is my  review:

Intro:  :good:
Outro:  :good:
Briefing: poor information: strength and equipment missing; weather condition missing; information about the map markers (red big circle); strength and equipment of your own personal.
See the Basic Mission Briefing Guide   ;)
Gear: very good selection  :cool2:  But I think it' disproportionate to the mission ambition.
Group: no chance to chance equipment for the team members. ::)

Mission:
  • In all not much modifications since my last reviews so there's not much to say.
  • I choose the SR 25 (S) as weapon but after the evac lorry arrived I could not reammo because the lorry was not
    equipmented with 20rd 7.62 Sniper SD Mags.  >:(
  • The civilians you placed in the down of Larche where poor and didn't behave in a good manner.
  • The Russians  didn't do much actually they just stood there and waited to be shot.  :whistle:
  • The BMP's didn't do it better. There was no crew which perhaps could have been an extra target or objective.
  • Actually my sniper did the big work; placed in a very good position he had made a easy and good job.
  • The 3 AT soldiers then destroyed the BMP's which was not that difficult.
  • The text when the conversation appears should be at the bottom in the black area. It's easier to fight then.
  • A good thing was that I was able to use a medic kit.  :good:
  • A lot of typos.

Summary: Not much has changed since the former reviews. To introduce an intro and outro is not enough.
The enemy appear to by wanted to be shot although it is mentioned in the briefing that the enemy is trained poor.
It would be more fun when it would be the opposite.  :cool2:

Unfortunately I was not able to open the Eviction1.3.Abel.pbo file.
The files inside were hidden or there was an error.  ???
In the mission editor I could not see the environment because it said Read only file.

Do you lock the Eviction1.3.Abel.pbo file? schuler  ??? ???

Regards limmy3


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Re: Eviction sp by schuler
« Reply #26 on: 15 Jun 2008, 17:24:05 »
Hey Limmy thank you ,,, good insight!
I have problems with a lot of stuff,,, 
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Do you lock the Eviction1.3.Abel.pbo file? schuler
yes!!!!!! can i send it to you?
 :D
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Briefing: poor information: strength and equipment missing; weather condition missing; information about the map markers (red big circle); strength and equipment of your own personal.
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I cant really make a good briefing in my life
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See the Basic Mission Briefing Guide
   

M I have seen it , I suggested to staff to add it to the site , efpec! Nice!

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In all not much modifications since my last reviews so there's not much to say.

M little things from the one of the 1st vers to help modify it .
Iam not looking for a winner here,,,, just a playable mission!

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The civilians you placed in the down of Larche where poor and didn't behave in a good manner
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M as would civilians leave a bad place like that!?!?!? the others if you looked around where burnt in a fire pit,  there was one guy running ,,, I think you might be talking about,
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I choose the SR 25 (S) as weapon but after the evac lorry arrived I could not reammo because the lorry was not
M its not my job to supply weapons.......
bust most of all if the lorry ,,[truck] didn't make it ,,,, that is a bug!!!!!!!,,,, should have made it for evac
The BMP's didn't do it better. There was no crew which perhaps could have been an extra target or objective.

M it is abandoned , just for game play ,,, it has no fuel,
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In all not much modifications since my last reviews so there's not much to say
M no I wanted to keep it simple, shot them up ,,, like Killing Fields ,,,,,,,,,


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The 3 AT soldiers then destroyed the BMP's which was not that difficult.
you mean no 3,,,, not 3 men

M makes it the player job for fun
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A good thing was that I was able to use a medic kit. 

for fun again,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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A lot of typos
thats me ,,,,, i can see them in missions but can right a letter to a friend :D
M thanks , I have fixed a lot of typo's you have giving before, will look again
Summary: Not much has changed since the former reviews. To introduce an intro and outro is not enough.
The enemy appear to by wanted to be shot although it is mentioned in the briefing that the enemy is trained poor.
It would be more fun when it would be the opposite. 

M Oh mate it is just a fun play mission that's all




Mission:
•   In all not much modifications since my last reviews so there's not much to say.
•   I choose the SR 25 (S) as weapon but after the evac lorry arrived I could not reammo because the lorry was not
equipmented with 20rd 7.62 Sniper SD Mags.   
•   The Russians  didn't do much actually they just stood there and waited to be shot.   
•   The BMP's didn't do it better. There was no crew which perhaps could have been an extra target or objective.
•   Actually my sniper did the big work; placed in a very good position he had made a easy and good job.
•   The 3 AT soldiers then destroyed the BMP's which was not that difficult.
•   The text when the conversation appears should be at the bottom in the black area. It's easier to fight then.
•   A good thing was that I was able to use a medic kit.   
•   A lot of typos.

Summary: Not much has changed since the former reviews. To introduce an intro and outro is not enough.
The enemy appear to by wanted to be shot although it is mentioned in the briefing that the enemy is trained poor.
It would be more fun when it would be the opposite.   

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if you could do my briefing , I would like that mate,,,,
In Killing Fields ,,,, when that  girl asks you if you an officer ,,,,, I might have been funny if you said " no mam but I can [b]stand attention [/b]!!!!! hehe ,,,,,,, 
cheers schuler
« Last Edit: 15 Jun 2008, 17:33:31 by schuler »
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« Reply #27 on: 20 Jun 2008, 04:05:50 »
Hello schuler

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Do you lock the Eviction1.3.Abel.pbo file? schuler
yes!!!!!! can i send it to you?
:yes: please, when I review the opening of the file belongs together.

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See the Basic Mission Briefing Guide
M I have seen it , I suggested to staff to add it to the site , efpec! Nice!
:yes: you're right I can remember.

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In all not much modifications since my last reviews so there's not much to say.
M little things from the one of the 1st vers to help modify it .
Iam not looking for a winner here,,,, just a playable mission!
It's a playable mission! Just think about these few modifications.  :good:

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The civilians you placed in the down of Larche where poor and didn't behave in a good manner
M as would civilians leave a bad place like that!?!?!? the others if you looked around where burnt in a fire pit,  there was one guy running ,,, I think you might be talking about,
Leave these civilians they are not important yet.  :no:

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I choose the SR 25 (S) as weapon but after the evac lorry arrived I could not reammo because the lorry was not
M its not my job to supply weapons.......
bust most of all if the lorry ,,[truck] didn't make it ,,,, that is a bug!!!!!!!,,,, should have made it for evac
The BMP's didn't do it better. There was no crew which perhaps could have been an extra target or objective.

M it is abandoned , just for game play ,,, it has no fuel,
Ok, no ammo the team must help them selfs. Ok true if the lorry wouldn't make it ... no backup.
BMP ... ok ... was just a thought of me.

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In all not much modifications since my last reviews so there's not much to say
M no I wanted to keep it simple, shot them up ,,, like Killing Fields ,,,,,,,,,
:yes: that where my thoughts with Killing Fields at first, too.
Just have a big force running against a small section and just shoot.
But for me it was just to easy having no other objectives.
That's way I made so many objectives for more game play.

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The 3 AT soldiers then destroyed the BMP's which was not that difficult.
you mean no 3,,,, not 3 men
M makes it the player job for fun
:yes: but it is more difficult to order your three units to put down the ATs only to do the job your self.
There are 3 AT soldiers in your section and it's fun to order them to a good firing position, give them covering
fire with other units and order them to destroy their target. But give the commander the possibility
to equipt his men him self.  :clap:

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A good thing was that I was able to use a medic kit.

for fun again,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
:yes: :clap: :good: :cool2:

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M Oh mate it is just a fun play mission that's all
:yes:, it is!!!!!!  :D :D

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if you could do my briefing , I would like that mate,,,,
I'll see if I'll find a few hours next week.
What about continuing with your mission with V1.8 with the intro and outro from 1.3?  ??? ???
Leave V 1.3 beta as it is. And send me an unlocked version 1.8?  ???

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In Killing Fields ,,,, when that  girl asks you if you an officer ,,,,, I might have been funny if you said " no mam but I can stand attention !!!!! hehe ,,,,,,,
:yes: this could be a funny ... I'll think about it.   >:D

Regards limmy3










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Re: Eviction sp by schuler
« Reply #28 on: 23 Jun 2008, 12:39:14 »
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thats where my thoughts with Killing Fields at first, too.
Just have a big force running against a small section and just shoot.
But for me it was just to easy having no other objectives.
That's way I made so many objectives for more game play. > Limmys [ killing fields]
  that's what happened here too hehe,  adding this and that,,,, started getting out of hand for me

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the 3 AT soldiers then destroyed the BMP's which was not that difficult.
but it is more difficult to order your three units to put down the ATs only to do the job your self.

 again for fun and gameplay ,,,,,,Pick up an RPG! I left a lot of enemy with them, just another challenge for game play!!!!!!

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What about continuing with your mission with V1.8 with the intro and outro from 1.3? 
Leave V 1.3 beta as it is. And send me an unlocked version 1.8

 Will do 1.8 and note in the next post, and send you a sqm version. And typo's fixed. hopefully  :D
And more notes too.

the main thing now is the lorrie "5 ton truck coming in for evec with ammo,,,, and  working on loading truck
and a better briefing  ;)
Cheers, and thanks too schuler
you have an email coming soon ;)
« Last Edit: 23 Jun 2008, 12:42:51 by schuler »
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« Reply #29 on: 24 Jun 2008, 23:36:29 »
Hi schuler,
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the 3 AT soldiers then destroyed the BMP's which was not that difficult.
but it is more difficult to order your three units to put down the ATs only to do the job your self.

 again for fun and gameplay ,,,,,,Pick up an RPG! I left a lot of enemy with them, just another challenge for game play!!!!!!
:yes: I do that naturally when I or my men have not ammo left. But by nature a soldier prefers his own equipment.
Because it is not under fire ...  :D

Looking forward to your new work!  :D

Regards limmy3
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