Played it through.
Didn't find any bugs. Everything worked cool. Just a few suggestions:
When I got to the ville, the text about the ville being infested with gooks showed only for a few seconds and then it reported the marines. Maybe put a small, maybe 8 second, delay on before the text about the marines is showed? This is to prevent the text flashing away too early if the player spots the marines right after he spotted the ville.
You know what I mean? ;D
English isn't my best language (I'm finnish) so I don't know for sure, but in the debriefing when it says; stiffer than expected resistance or something like that, wouldn't it sound better if it was; stiffer resistance than expected? As I said I'm not sure and what I've gathered you know more about english than me ;D so I'll rest my case.
Just a thought.
I got 7 men left, including me, at the end. The ending trigger seemed to activate when all team members were in the base, which was good.
Finished in about 30-40 minutes, with score about 1700. I should have taken notes of those but the thought slipped from my mind.
This is a great mission! I'm eagerly waiting for the version with voices (I hope you get voice actors), music (Right?
) and cinematics.