Now, would you go to the lengths of doing a commented mission? What I have in mind is to provide un-pbo'ed mission examples of the campaign where every step in mission making is explained and documented. It is just a huge bit of more work, but would highlight the "editing side" of OFPEC.
Besides, we have to agree on a story and setting again. If you have one in mind, feel free to create a new thread, this one starts to become messy already.