Sorry it took much time, but I finally played this through. I didnt spot any showstoppers but some small typos and missing mission names in briefing, but I dont know if that last one is some beta bug. I think I saw mission name right in briefing, but later it was changed to say "intro". I saw it wrong in 3rd and 4th mission, but just to make sure if you want you could check the rest of the missions too.
The small typos:
-"what is the satrep of czech sf units" -> sitrep?
-"We are follow you, one. Over" -> following?
-"...We hear that arty firing. Now We`ll can find it. Over" -> "...We hear that arty firing now. We should be able to find it. Over" ?
-"Negative. Only robber and tiger attack Falar. Theif and leopard..." -> Thief
-(late chat after meeting the leader in first village): "...Obama is thanks you..." -> remove is
-(in Ravanay after seeing the dead civilians) "...try to figured out what happened..." -> figureIn 5th mission
there is unneeded savegame after blowing the D30s.In 6th mission
I noticed that player cant drag/carry wounded soldiers even when there is that advanced medic system. It could be a small nice addition, but not essential. I think it might be missing from other missions too. Also, after capturing Falar there could be need for reinforcements for player´s group. E.g. if player have less than 3 units in group, the dawn could bring few groupmembers more (2-3). In 7th mission
the chopper lands too close of the stopped radioactive truck. It can easily end badly in unfair way. I suggest to move the landing spot much more far. E.g. 100-200m more away. When the player get out the chopper this error is displayed but it have no effect on mission (it played well to the end):
p destance nuc < 50 -> should be "distance"
But overally a very nice challenging campaign. I start writing the review now, that should be ready in few days (+time for english check). If you want you can still fix some or none of these small issues - Let me know. I can also review the campaign as it is now.EDIT: I noticed you have 1.0 version in Armaholic, but it says 0.9 in here which is the version I played trought. But after compareing the modified dates, is that first post giving also the 1.0 here? That readme in the download, should include also the version number, installation instructions and the game version that is needed (e.g. OA 1.57).