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« Reply #30 on: 09 Jan 2011, 08:36:45 »

This mission has come a long way since my first play test. There are only a few things more that need correcting.

OVERVIEW
The Overview is fantastic compared to the first version.

INTRO
Although slightly long for a drifting camera, the Intro is also good with only a few quirky camera angles but overall, nicely done.

BRIEFING
Starting with the notes page,
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What can I say, why do 5 men have to fight against half of the Russian army? Why me? I<I<I have the skills too, but some times God wants a different end for somebody and nobody can  change that. I wish all my partners good luck to survive this.

Plan page,
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Your mission will be to attack different weak points of the Socialist-Nogova. We expect some heavy armor protecting the targets and many infantry. A civilian contact will give you some help with an AT Launcher. If you need any more info:

Objective1 - Good
Objective2 - Good
Objective3 -
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After the convoy is destroyed, go to the <a href = "marker:dep">old factory</a>. Eliminate all the Russian soldiers in the old factory, NO ONE has to survive.
Objective4 -
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Eliminate the enemy presence in the e<air base. You can ask for help from Foxtrot squad (0,0,1), located closer to the base, to help you.
Objective5 - Good
Objective7 - Good

Debriefing 4 -
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The factory is strongly protected by a BMP and a KAMOV. Also, there are many .50 caliber machineguns protecting the front of the factory. Watch Petrovic<there.
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Satellite images
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Significant Russian forces, including tanks and choppers, are stationed at the air base.

Civilian page
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A few civilians were seen at Cd50, being guarded by soldiers in the houses, be careful.

Gear page - You say you provided a Glock but I only noticed a Smith and Wesson for a pistol.

Mission
The numbers were balanced well enough and most seemed to respond to what was going on around them but not all of them. There were still some that only reacted when the area trigger was activated. No big deal though and certainly no mission stopper. The factory looked much better this time around, the added ammo depot in the desert was another nice touch and the various patrols and lone snipers that wandered the terrain made for cautious progress. The Artillery was a great addition to the missions fun factor but nothing responded to the destruction. I realize that this would require more scripting and more variables to detect the explosions and so its nothing that removes too much from the mission since we all know well enough some of the negatives of AI behavior.

In any case, I encountered an issue with the documents objective again. The objective never completes in the briefing.

And lastly, the boat arrives at the evac, my men board as do I but the boat never leaves to end the mission.

I go ahead and end the mission anyways to view the Outro.

Outro
The Outro was also nice work with only a few bad angles.

Overall
Very well improved! Just a couple of fixes away from a review. I look forward to seeing you improve on your other projects too.

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« Reply #31 on: 24 Jan 2011, 07:32:06 »

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« Reply #32 on: 28 Jan 2011, 18:37:17 »

NEW version available
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« Reply #33 on: 28 Jan 2011, 21:09:52 »

Hi man, apparently the file is damaged..!
I try download it again, but the problem persist.

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« Reply #34 on: 29 Jan 2011, 00:05:24 »

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« Reply #35 on: 29 Jan 2011, 01:04:58 »

Umm, the problem persist. I think that's the mission because I open the readme.txt and works, but if I try to open the mission not open. Why?

Why you not do it again? I refer to that you must to convert again the SQM file to PBO file!  Why you think?
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« Reply #36 on: 29 Jan 2011, 05:29:07 »

I've down loaded it and it works fine on my end.
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« Reply #37 on: 29 Jan 2011, 06:34:21 »

Could you see if the mission ends correctly? or you found any bug?
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« Reply #38 on: 29 Jan 2011, 13:01:58 »

I don't understand Why when I try download  the file, i get damaged?
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« Reply #39 on: 29 Jan 2011, 13:59:52 »

In fact, the auther seemed to have mistakenly put the .pbo file inside a file that look like a editor mission file.
You must put the .pbo file in the missions folder.

And yes, I'm going to check this one out.
(Correct me if I'm wrong, wasn't this mission about a sniper who has to save two pilots before they get executed?)

You should edit your first post so that, the "Known Bugs" section only shows the latest version's bugs.
(NOT old bugs.)
And you also should edit the texts so that they look clearer. (Use 'Bold' and 'Italic' to highlights important things)

Oh, by the way, the old one was a great one to play apart from some bugs.


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« Reply #40 on: 29 Jan 2011, 15:20:58 »

No, the changelog is fine on the first post. I haven't played the mission again yet. It's on the list with the others.

The pilot rescue mission was "Operation Gods Hands"
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« Reply #41 on: 29 Jan 2011, 16:04:02 »

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The pilot rescue mission was "Operation Gods Hands"
So many confusions when you have too many Operations....  Cheesy







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« Reply #42 on: 29 Jan 2011, 16:59:54 »

Is Savedbygrace the only one who could download it and play it correctly or  something else is wrong with the file?

P.D: The mission .pbo thaat i upload is the one that i get when i export mission to single player.
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« Reply #43 on: 02 Feb 2011, 06:45:33 »

I wouldlike to get some fresh feedback becausei think the only one who knows about this mission is savedbygrace and he must have tried this mission so many times that he knows it as well as his hand, so please i would like to invite someone to try this.

P.D: Savedbygrace, i really appreciate your patience but you are the only guy of the staff who tried this mission apart from Walter_E_Kurtz
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« Reply #44 on: 02 Feb 2011, 14:12:23 »

Unfortunately, most of the staff do not play OFP anymore. You can't force folks to play something that they feel is inferior to what they enjoy. Walter, RKurtz and myself, apart from you now are the only staff that test missions from OFP for others. We only have two of us for Armed Assault. That's why we need more staff playing the other titles.

BTW, I am halfway through your latest version; I'll provide feedback asap.
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